Friday 26 August 2016

Literacy Reflection Week 5 Term 3



This is my writing I did it about Kitt .The purpose was to write a explanation .We did it on a google slide and I am most proud of my work . I need to work on adding more detail to my work.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Cruz I really liked your slideshow about Kitt because of how you explained it well with detail. My favourite part was when you said red flashing lights like demon blood. You will need to work a bit on your spelling other than that, its good. From Nikalai

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.