Friday 2 September 2016

Writing reflection week 6 Term 3



The porpoise of this is that I had to write a explanation of a  Life cycle of a frog.  I think I did well will following the structure of an explanation.  I need to work on writing a strong conclusion.  

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Cruz. My name is Bodie. I really like your topic. You found a lot of information about the life cycle of a frog. Next time could change the colour of your font because it is hard to see. Noho ake rā.

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  2. Kia ora Cruz.I really like how you used detailed words in your writing. What is the most interesting piece of writing to you? maybe next time you can write a little bit more. Noho ake ra.

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