Monday 7 May 2018

descriptive writing

I can smell the fresh cold morning air tickling my nostrils as I sniff .I can hear the frost getting crushed every time I take a step. I can see my breath like a dragon that is out of fire. This is winter.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Cruz. I know that you have been working very hard on perfecting your descriptive writing since we first started this learning. I am looking forward to reading your other works, to show everyone how much you have grown in your descriptive writing ability. Tino pai te mahi

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  2. Hello. My name is Grace from Mamaku 2. I love this picture because it looks very nice in the winter with frost and snow. You have some good describing ideas. I like your sentence about the dragon being out of fire. What is your favourite thing to do in winter? Bye.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.