descriptive writing

I can smell the fresh cold morning air tickling my nostrils as I sniff .I can hear the frost getting crushed every time I take a step. I can see my breath like a dragon that is out of fire. This is winter.

writing reflection

This week in writing we had to describe a character’s physical features.

My Goal: To make my sentences longer by using FANBOYS.

Here is my writing. I think I am going well with my goal. Can you find FANBOYS in my sentences.

Mrs P has brown fuzzy hair and it sticks out because she doesn't do it in the morning.

Mrs P's eyes are a browny hazel colour.   

Mrs P face is very very very very very very very very very beautiful.

2017 camp in Westport was my favourite memorable moment because I was in Mrs P car and she let us have the music up loud and it was the best camp ever.

I like that Mrs P is kind and nice.